A Drop Off Comments

Yes this is the reality of existence we see in Nature and us.........great piece with great composition...........

Mind sometimes gloom in grieves Sink it in the pool of tears Swathe it with shadow wings After awhile it burst and rapture Revives the grief to the lane unknown It's to the reality of existence! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tears are not only relief but peace maker and a pace maker.

Spill the drops after awhile, beautifully composed in each step and each stanza of this poem and heart touchable. Nice and expressive one. Great work on sharing.