Sunday, September 4, 2016

A Drop Of Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me be a drop of water
sitting on the edge of a green leaf
complete in itself- -
well-rounded, transparent
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Sharad Rajimwale
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Anjali sunuwar 30 November 2018

👌👌 I like the poem

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Rajnish Manga 22 December 2017

Nicely conceptualised and presented poem using drop of a water as a metaphor. Thanks. it will just tumble / to its end / splitting into countless tiny globules / of its own self / let me be that drop of water

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 04 September 2016

Yo! I am left with nothing besides picture of the drop of water at the tip of a leaf, really I can see the reflection of things there, even my own reflection. Thanks for sharing.10!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

Complete in itself! Nice work.

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Sharad Rajimwale

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