A Drop Of Sea Comments

Such poem is a example of a beautiful modern poems i can read here, at least i feel it if not others...but i can feel that this writing is applaud by others who read...it easily absorbed to readers' mind and the beauty is obvious...definitely one of your best Vishal

Basket of tears with the ways of life. Nice piece of work.

A lot of subtle emotion.but I guess it happens in life. Great writing Congrats Mohabeer Beeharry Read my poems sometimes

Your poem made me remember when I was younger and looking for my one true love - he never came - until I stopped looking. Now 37 years later we are still married and in love. A lucky one - I got the ocean. Love this poem - I too had heartaches before finding my true love - before that only a drop from each one. Growing old together is so much fun! Even through the trials and suffering we are one. Thank you for such a beautiful poem. Keep writing, your poetry will lead you to maturity. Always go back and read the first poems you wrote and you will see how much you've grown through the years. RoseAnn

Good keep it on.You write superb

great write amazing

wow you are a hero

Love this, with amazing lines, great title!

Very nice write. Many of the lovers (mostly in disguise) promise ocean, while we needed a drop. Alas finally betrayed amidst the sea, not a drop to drink and survive. keep penning, you have a nice skill of selecting simple, yet lovely words.

Ah love can be so cruel. You may search for perfection but end up with compromise. I like your style very well written poem. thanks for sharing BB : O)