Wednesday, August 21, 2013

A Drop Of Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hold in my palm
And peep inside the sphere
From the sparkling surface
To deep into its middle
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Seamus O Brian 05 October 2016

a moment in time. Beautiful image.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 October 2016

Sometime we miss the beauty hidden in simple things in nature. Thanks for support. Regards.

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Aileen Figueroa 07 November 2015

The simple things in life. Funny, we cannot even enjoy them. Funny you found delight in something so simple as a drop of water. And that is why I clearly enjoy this poem ;-)

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Bharati Nayak 11 July 2015

Some moments are like that drop of water we want to hold in our palm.Nice imagery and beautiful penning. .

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Maryanne Richards 27 May 2014

Simply beautiful. Thank you for your comment on my poem.

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Leloudia Migdali 07 May 2014

Such a wonderful watery poem.I loved it.

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Savita Tyagi 24 August 2013

Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. Like a little rain drop we all are.

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Roseann Shawiak 24 August 2013

Very nice. Could actually see the raindrop in my own hand and playing with it. Not wanting to let it go, yet it vanished the same as yours did. Good poem, could relate totally to it. Keep writing. RoseAnn

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Lorraine Colon 22 August 2013

So for a brief moment you were mesmerized by a drop of rain. What a lovely thought. Very nice poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 August 2013

a beautiful moment soon lost in the maze of reality! lovely poem.

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