Thursday, August 6, 2009

A Drop Of Pleasure Comments

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Young love arise, left and right
Though cloudy, yes obscure
Everyone thirst just for a drop
A dropp of one man's pleasure
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Nashy Lamen 06 August 2009

I agree with julia.. but it is true.. Its still weak and not properly molded yet... nice poem to ponder on.. c:

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Julia Pascual 06 August 2009

you're really not into young love.. obviously.. LOL... but you really dignified your point here.. nice poem..

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