Monday, October 7, 2013

A Drop Of Happiness Comments

Rating: 4.4

From the grief ocean, I steal, a drop of happiness,
For every autumn, I get a lovely beautiful spring,
For human youth; the festive, to dance and sing,
We nature, within nature; keepeth blissful fitness,
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Navod Dilhara 29 November 2019

Rhetorical questions emphasize quite lot of things. Nicely written.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 02 August 2016

I liked it. it is so beautiful and descriptive..

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Souren Mondal 13 February 2016

[...] dry petals, away from hate, I kiss, From the grief ocean, a drop of happiness, they bring.[...] Such finely written lines.. A beautiful poem., thanks for sharing :)

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A very good nature-inspiring poem

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Seema Chowdhury 05 July 2015

Beautiful and inspiring, Lovely to read.

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Ruby Mostazir 15 June 2015

Love each and every lines of it bro.....nice thought provoking poem..deserves 10 :)

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Clarence Prince 13 May 2015

I am happy to read this poem it's so well written! Thank for sharing, Aftab!

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Josey Alfred 05 May 2015

From the grief of ocean, I steal, a drop of happiness Very beautiful poem, thanks for this good poem. You are able to find beautiful pearls from beneath the Ocean waves.

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Tushar Ray 27 April 2015

A wonderful depiction of happiness! Indeed, who would look for happiness if there is no sorrow? Darkness is meaningful because of darkness! Very nice!

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 21 April 2015

Lovely read! thought provoking! I live for every drop of happiness! Dorothy A poet Who Loves To Sing

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 23 March 2015

Truly said, true happiness is experienced only after tasting pain.

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Elena Sandu 13 March 2015

Oops padon my typo, I'm awfully hungry!

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Elena Sandu 13 March 2015

Beautiful and filled with truth poem, loved the read thank you for sharing! Yes, I also think that nature is our souls best medication. I also agree with what you say, indeed how could we truly know how prcious is happiness if we would not know its opposite?

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 March 2015

Please read and comment and vote if you like, I am proud of for liking this poem thank you all

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Farisa Haleel 09 November 2014

niceee!!! i steal a bit of pleasure from the poem..:)

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Amitava Sur 26 October 2014

It feels really remarkable to know that you could steal a drop of happiness from within the ocean of grief. Loved it.

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Khalida Bano Ali 26 October 2014

There will not be a spring without autumn; no taste, If no sorrow, what taste happiness will provide? say, If no youth, why then heart will throb, gaily and gay? Autumn prepares to decorate the heart with haste.. Beautiful poem, nice thoughts.

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Leloudia Migdali 23 October 2014

A drop of happiness! I loved this! Nice poem!

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Roseann Shawiak 19 October 2014

From the grief ocean, I steal a drop of happiness. How clever you are to see and find a drop of happiness in the ocean of grief. I feel those drops may come from our memories of past good times. You steal a drop from yesterday in order to get through all the tomorrows yet to come. Brilliant and profound, Aftab. I give you a 10 for this one. Thank you for sharing and enlightening those in sorrow. RoseAnn

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Sallam Yassin 09 October 2013

very sensed that sweet touch of the art From the heart to heart touch! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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