Sunday, March 29, 2009

A Drop Of A Water Comments

Rating: 3.0

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Mohammed Al-balushi)

a hard rain
dropped last night
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

i have to read this poem again because it reminded me of the story: One day, a Mr. A asked Mr. B and he said, 'Til when shall you need friends'... with swift, Mr. B dropped a dropp of water to the river and Mr. B replied saying 'Until you find that dropp of water and bring them exactly to me'... nice write as always!

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Sherif Monem 04 March 2010

Very nice rich poem.

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Sherif Monem 04 March 2010

Very nice rich poem.

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Noel Horlanda 24 September 2009

This is a brave call for global warming, climate change especially to environmentalist. A brave call to stop cutting down trees, reforestation is needed, stop using fossil fuels, use organic substances only to avoid further destruction.We need divine intervention but since we're the culprit of all these calamities, then we need the help from the entire world in order to survive.Earth is the only planet, the only home we've got, no other else so let's protect it for God's sake.Well done, pal.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 September 2009

As far as I can remember this is the third time I've read this.Can you wonder I'm an athiest?

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Ben Gieske 14 July 2009

The thought occured to me that the most surprising thing about your poem is its title. All this began with a dropp of water. Little things are significant and can accumulate or increase or grow, etc. to become more significant in other ways.

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Ben Gieske 14 July 2009

You try hard to find an explanation and comfort for so great a tragedy. In this respect you reflect the need and desire of so many. It is difficult for us to accept the fact that we live in a material world, that we are human and an unavoidable part of it, that changes happen constantly no matter the consequences.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 June 2009

I've read this one before. Considered the event a natural disaster.

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Malini Kadir 23 May 2009

this is a soulful cry my friend! ..... a dropp of deep tear is formed in reading.......pain is dissolved in the words that flow....

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Bonnie Collins 06 May 2009

A very touching write about the 'other side'of mother nature..... But at times of this, I find, that we are not to judge what and why, but to accept and move forward.... Very nicely penned....

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Indira Renganathan 30 April 2009

The last three stanzas are extremely reasonable and sensible and very much apt...very touching..excellent

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wow, who couldn've known how deadly and merciless a dropp of water could truly be? emotion deeply felt. sad, but enjoyed reading it. thanks. -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

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liek God, water is what we need to most, but its wrath can be plan scary..

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Barry A. Lanier 12 April 2009

reminding this reader of the essence of degrees....water is only agitated at 211 but at 212 can power locomotives..one dropp of water tingles...yet many can create havoc

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Bonnie Collins 12 April 2009

A very leghthly write, has alot expression and filled with much imagery....

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Juan Carlos Abeti 11 April 2009

beautiful as alwayes, a great job

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Raja Basu 11 April 2009

What a beautiful way to express your respect for the departed souls of the victims. Marvelous work Ahmad.

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Eyan Desir 10 April 2009

This was a good write

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Twilight By The River 08 April 2009

i loved it so much, i am praying with you to God, to His great mercy to alleviate our troubles 'Ameen'

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roushan banu 08 April 2009

O God, who has all heavens, and earth! Your Love is bigger than Your Anger. very true...... great poem

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