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This obstacle will be removed, As the morning dew, Disappear in front of sun. Until the day comes, Let us lead a simple life.--these lines expose the realism of life

This poem reflects our times, VS...everyday we read about people losing their jobs and, as you know, it is no different even in Europe, in the advanced economies...I like the message of a better day in your poem and this remedy: until then, explore the gardens, in our cities, where the fresh air is free, to oxygenate.

A powerful poem! Painfully humorous and hurtful and inspiring! A fabulous one by you! Thanks