A Drizzle Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

A Drizzle

Rating: 4.6


Skies overcast
Mighty elephants
In parade,
Incessant fireworks
Light the skies
And their sound
Dares the eardrums,
Conches and horns
And two sided drums,
Sun goes hiding
Is it night or day?

A mighty breeze
Comes from nowhere
Ushering in a drizzle
Too light to wet the earth
Elephants give way
For the shining diety.

A summer shower
that never was.

Friday, June 10, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet's Note: I have presented the overcast skies with thunder and lightning, by means of a series of metaphors related to the festivals of Hindu temples of Kerala. In the festivals, the dieties are paraded on heavily and gaudily decorated elephants. In the festival of some temples like Kootalmanikyam temple Irinjalakuda, there will be a parade of seventeen or nineteen elephants, where the diety is paraded on one elephant at the centre, and the others just accompany. Heavy bright lighting arrangements and colourful fireworks too form part of the festivals.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 11 June 2022

It sounds very beautiful! .. And filled with much awe! .. Very beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2024

Thanks for Poet's Notes. I give **** for poem and Notes.

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Thank you Bri, for all those stars.

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2024

Rainbows are nice, but I've never found a 'pot of gold' at 'the end of a rainbow', nor have I even found an 'end' exactly. Showers, too, can be nice; I took a shower about a month ago, even though unneeded. ;)

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It is a revelation to me that it is sufficient to have showers once a month or at longer intervals. I take twice a day. Maybe I am mentally ill or possessed..

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2024

I was going to ask if 'shiny deity' refers to the sun reappearing after the shower, BUT then I noticed 'rainbow' given as a poem topic [[ though it is not openly mentioned in the poem ]]. So is the 'shining deity' a rainbow?

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I meant ‘sun', but don't mind if you read rainbow

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2024

** MARCH TO A DIFFERENT DRUMMER: 'march to a different drummer phrase of march INFORMAL consciously adopt a different approach or attitude to the majority of people.'

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That is exactly what I like in you, Bri

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2024

Some (members here, and wives I've had, and friends, and coworkers) have probably said of me, Brian Edward Whitaker, : 'Bri 'marches to a different drummer**'.' And so I may. ;) bri

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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