A Drinking Song Comments

I liked this piece because it has a good flow to it. a good esample of form following function. Some lovely images there too.

This is excellent and original to my eyes. I totally respect your referencing your inspiration, too. It would be great though if it didn't have to share the same immediate space.

John, you did yourself in by showing your inspiration. Your poem is indeed original. There are no new ideas, but you have been touched and written this drinking poem in a really new way. I love the idea of poetry flowing from your heart the same way wine flows from a bottle into a crystal glass. I smell the bouquet of your words and savor their taste. Raynette

Maybe try something a little more original.