Wednesday, November 7, 2007

A Drink Of Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is difficult for so many people
Now and back through the ages
Sometimes existence seems like a test
Hardship at many different stages
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Marilyn Lott
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Romeo Della Valle 12 September 2010

An excellent reflective poem that should make some people ponder upon! Well- penned, thanks for sharing, my friend! 10+++ Love and Peace....

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Kesav Easwaran 23 August 2009

'..............................water A life-giving part of the land A necessity that God has given us Helping the weak strong enough to stand'... Good lines these...nice way to combine together God's mercy, water and life...thanks Marilyn...10

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Mamta Agarwal 14 March 2009

very thoughtful poem, full of compassion and a need to be thankful for small mercies.10 we still need to learn using natural resources with respect. Mamta

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Ben Gieske 07 November 2007

there’s usually water A life-giving part of the land A timely topic. We will be appreciating water much more in the future. Some are forecasting a water crisis to come. The southeastern part of the nation is already experiencing a serious drought and no relief in sight.

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