Thursday, December 7, 2006

A Drifter As Driftwood Comments

Rating: 5.0

The knock-kneed girl who wears a knee cap, beautiful flowery knickerbockers and carries a knapsack?
A knick-knack around her slim neck and tossing a Kopeck in a narrow cobbled street she walks towards home the late evening.
I feel lonely myself with the sorrowful Sunset and before midnight I must go back to the ship as she suppose to sail early in the morning.
I regret that I couldn’t ask her name and I made a note in my diary with an asterisk.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 07 December 2006

A bittersweet poem that has the timeless quality of a dream. The mood is as intangible as a watercolor drawing. Fine imagery in this one, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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Tranquil Ocean 07 December 2006

Knock, knock! ! And greetings to you too, Nimal! ! TO

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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