Saturday, March 8, 2014

A Dreaming Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

if veracity stings dreams are delight,
i meet those dreams in the dawning night

where memories old, , too old too old
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Shashi Sen 06 February 2020

Very sweet poem

0 0 Reply
* Sunprincess * 29 June 2014

.........................~~~~~~~~~ love Love love ~~~~~~~~~.........................

0 0 Reply
Rishabh Bidya 12 April 2014

Whoever that child is, he must be very fortunate indeed.

0 0 Reply
V P Mahur 10 April 2014

Dear Kanav, This is a sweet melodious poem. It is true that sometimes the dreams are very sweet. Nice one. Thanks!

0 0 Reply
Yash Shinde 19 March 2014

......dreaming child within us is really lost...call it a result of time or sign of development, we've lost the capacity to dream........and so have lost our innocence.....great write Kanav

0 0 Reply
Shahzia Batool 16 March 2014

I wonder too Kanav on the same lines...near perfect couplet-composition, so meaningful!

0 0 Reply
Dinesan Madathil 15 March 2014

Children must grow dreaming And the grown ups should follow suit.. It is on the right track that you position your thoughts, Kanav.

0 0 Reply
The Reader 15 March 2014

That dreaming child is a timeless, ageless being, still resides in you...it's he who has composed this poem, it's he who dares to dream, it's he who is very talented guy! good work!

0 0 Reply
Joseph Anderson 12 March 2014

Today I am 89 and here I sit, reading a very beautiful poem and thinking of all the water that has gone over the dam. An excellant write from one so young, or for any age-10 in my book

0 0 Reply
Rajesh Thankappan 11 March 2014

Dreams are a doorway which often opens straight into an unforeseen wonderland. A lovely poem Kanav, which makes me long for a beautiful dream. May this dream of mine at least come true!

0 0 Reply
Rubab Atwal 10 March 2014

a truly beautiful poem...amazing lines yes there is a difference in the world of reality and the world of dreams

0 0 Reply
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 March 2014

A very dreamy and fascinating poem very delicately crafted..........I loved it....a must 10.....Kanav

0 0 Reply
Payal Parande 09 March 2014

dreams are the doors of new world full of hope and belief, wonderfully expressed feeling of a innocent child bravo sir

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren 08 March 2014

The drems of a child are innocent and sweet. Lovely poem Kanav.

0 0 Reply
kanav justa

kanav justa

Shimla
Close
Error Success