if veracity stings dreams are delight,
i meet those dreams in the dawning night
where memories old, , too old too old
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Dear Kanav, This is a sweet melodious poem. It is true that sometimes the dreams are very sweet. Nice one. Thanks!
......dreaming child within us is really lost...call it a result of time or sign of development, we've lost the capacity to dream........and so have lost our innocence.....great write Kanav
I wonder too Kanav on the same lines...near perfect couplet-composition, so meaningful!
Children must grow dreaming And the grown ups should follow suit.. It is on the right track that you position your thoughts, Kanav.
That dreaming child is a timeless, ageless being, still resides in you...it's he who has composed this poem, it's he who dares to dream, it's he who is very talented guy! good work!
Today I am 89 and here I sit, reading a very beautiful poem and thinking of all the water that has gone over the dam. An excellant write from one so young, or for any age-10 in my book
Dreams are a doorway which often opens straight into an unforeseen wonderland. A lovely poem Kanav, which makes me long for a beautiful dream. May this dream of mine at least come true!
a truly beautiful poem...amazing lines yes there is a difference in the world of reality and the world of dreams
A very dreamy and fascinating poem very delicately crafted..........I loved it....a must 10.....Kanav
dreams are the doors of new world full of hope and belief, wonderfully expressed feeling of a innocent child bravo sir
The drems of a child are innocent and sweet. Lovely poem Kanav.
Very sweet poem