A Dreaming Child Comments

This poem is beautiful in the sense that the child's dreams are his potential. Euphoric...Love :) a 10

I agree with Akhtar hi that the poetess is fully aware of the chid's psychology.

The title lured me in on this one because I was 'A Dreaming Child', I even painted the green leaves on my neighbours green hedge yellow when about 5 to 7 years of age. 'as a golden star blazes a trail across the starry sky a light breeze is blowing on a warm summer’s night so many stars are twinkling in a midnight blue sky and the brightest moon ever is sailing so very high so many fireflies are twinkling in the woods nearby alone a watchful owl cries who who on this night listen closely to hear this owl take off in flight! ' loved this, sounds like me, later I will probably write about whistling in fruit bats in the tropics to my balcony, in the dark night hours taking a break from writing :)

Nice enjoyed reading this one, good job as always.

Unique and Beautiful.

Hello poet. I enjoyed this delightful poem of childhood fantasy, dreams and just the simple sweetness of life. My best to you, Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

WOW' such a lovely poem it is Rachel! ! You expressed so many things in eyes of a dreaming child, specially the equality, fraternity, love and brotherhood in your 4th part..... An amazing write.

I love this poem. The child's dreams are very close to my own: 'the same language is spoken by everyone and we see animals have not been caged by anyone.....' I've added it to my favourites to read again in the future.

Tagore said, every new born child comes in this world with a message that God is not yet dejected with the humans. Language of love is universal. A child is completely innocent, so are his dreams. This poem shows the poetess is fully aware of human psychology. As far as the poem is concerned, it is all known that Rachel is fully capable of beautifying a child in a colorful dress of words.

Such a beautiful poem, Rachel.

wonderful imaginations with perfection of beauty of creativity in the poem and so interested very much.

Entire poem depicted with five scenes.each scene has its distnct value. entire poem nicely penned segregating one from another.poetry can not be praised but realised. lovely beautiful.10++++

Made me feel like going back to bed and recapturing some of my dreams! You delved so beautifully into the dream world. A child dream so innocent and pure. I am glad it was a child (smile) . Beautiful poem.

I like the poem. Very beautiful. Thanks

This is a so full of innocent wonder, the nighttime serenity of nature and the peaceful calm of sweet slumber. Loved it.

nice written really the depth of words is soul stirring.

A wonderful story in this poem if only it could be like that for real beautifully written

Wonderful imagery n rhymin. One of yor best brilliant poem. Innocent child in sweet dreamworld and real night scenes wow. Tc.

In his dream, the same language is spoken by everyone...What depth of expression! Wonderful imagery.

Such a sweet poem. A child's world is full of dream, joy and and happiness. Let's pray for every child to have that loving and innocent world that your poem talks so wonderfully. Wishing you all the best. Thank you so much for stopping by my page and glad that you enjoyed the poem.