A Dreamers Lament Comments

I love this David....oh, how i love this

Wow I really love this one... I love the flow of it, dreamlike in its rhythm and very soothing... beautiful write, thanks for sharing your previous work, I really enjoyed it! Hugs, Lee

David, This is most certainly the kind of poem that touches my heart...it is lovely! Dorothy

Great job David it is always nice to see some of a poets older poems as well as you can learn alot from them about previous beliefs the poet held and maybe see small changes here and there in the attitude of the poets newer writings...but even back them you were a dreamer and that is the only way to be! A dreamer but one that makes things happen! ((Smile)) Great thought provoking piece my friend. Take care of U =Shelley=

I love the closing lines especially David, you have a fine way about your words, always evolving yet still holding on to your individuality Great work again Love duncan X

Gorgeous and poignant and ever so eloquently penned. HG: -) xx

This is magnificent. The No Man Is An Island struck me as it took me back to the time I first discoved that read and it's been a keeper... So well done is this one. ~~m.x~~

I love this David, sort of old school poem which i love...

I agree with Allie - one of your best. I'm in love with the last stanza, fool that I am.... :) t x

David this is very very good. One of your best in fact. It has a sweet melancholic soul and a structure which is at the same time lyrical and very touching. Beautiful poetry. love, Allie xxxx

I say 'WOW'! ! ! i like the words a lot...the thought...the impact... 'One can only dream of things, with hope they’ll come true, but fools are only dreamers, and fools win in the end'..a 10!