Saturday, November 10, 2007

A Dreamer Of Dreams Comments

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You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.
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Justine Keaton
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Dreamily lyrical indeed. Flowing and serene. t x

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Alison Cassidy 10 November 2007

This is a pretty impressive first up sonnet - one of the most difficult poetic forms to master. Congratulations on a great effort. love, Allie xxxx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 November 2007

Better a dreamer be, if in this world it's love that you see...10

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