A Dreamer Comments

A great truth here is unveiled through your dreams...! Only by changing oneself, one can change the world....! The only possible thing within our capacity is to try to change ourselves before we set targets of greater dimension, though that itself is challenging! A deep and thoughtful write Deepak!

Thoughtful write. Very true said in few lines...... That if long ago I had changed myself I could have made an impact on my family My family and I on our town And their impact could have changed the nation..Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

I enjoy this poem. The last verse you used very straightforward language as opposed to the preceding verses where you used more imagery. This took me out of the mood you had created.