Sunday, November 9, 2014

A Dreamed Home Coming Comments

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Blooming lilies in the pond rising high
Smile and swing to the rhythm of wind
Bees roaming around amongst flowers
Sing a lullaby so sweet and graceful
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Blooming lilies in the pond rising high give us new dream of hope and softness. Dark clumsy clouds cover sun and sun opens face to give light. Restless days still set nest. Warmness of perception through natural dream is nicely presented in this beautifully penned poem...10

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Valsa George 14 November 2014

When children who are away from home come back on vacation, it is such a delight for the parents! The nest that has been lying empty for long becomes once more vibrant with life! Days earlier to the count down, the dear ones begin weaving beautiful dreams about the sweet home coming! I can so well relate to this poem!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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