Thursday, March 31, 2005

A Dream Within A Dream Comments

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as i close my eyes
a blackhole looms
this inner world
a torment it brings
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john tiong chunghoo
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Joscephine Gomez 31 May 2007

How true! The Buddha says all is just an illusion. Everything around us is characterized by dependent origination. Only that which has no beginning and no end qualifies as Truth as Truth has no beginning and no end.

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Patricia Gale 03 September 2006

Fantastic piece! Well versed

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Raynette Eitel 31 May 2005

John, this poem rambles. It is not tight like some of your shorter poems. Again, I would not give my inspiration. The reader tends to focus on the original poet rather than your work. I would love to see you rework this poem as I like the idea of a dream within a dream. I write so many dream poems. Raynette

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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