as i close my eyes
a blackhole looms
this inner world
a torment it brings
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John, this poem rambles. It is not tight like some of your shorter poems. Again, I would not give my inspiration. The reader tends to focus on the original poet rather than your work. I would love to see you rework this poem as I like the idea of a dream within a dream. I write so many dream poems. Raynette
How true! The Buddha says all is just an illusion. Everything around us is characterized by dependent origination. Only that which has no beginning and no end qualifies as Truth as Truth has no beginning and no end.