A Dream With You Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A Dream With You

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Together in an endless dream,
would be my ideal time to spend,
each moment far away from life,
with you my one true precious friend.
For in my dream we're as we were,
together walking neath the sun.
Watching butterflies go by,
picking bluebells,
having fun.
Taking in the morning air,
walking to the mountain top.
Looking at the valley below,
our resting place
our final stop.
To take in all we loved in life,
our village that lay far below,
That holds the key to our own hearts,
such beauty how we loved it so.
Together in an endless dream,
I'd spend my whole eternity,
just loving life in our own way,
neath summer sun,
just you and me.



Jayne Louise Davies

A Dream With You
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isadora Quagmire 14 July 2025

I love how you capture the value of friendship and the small joys of life—like bluebells, mountain walks, and looking over the village. Your poem is a touching reminder of how special these moments are! Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt piece; it is both beautiful and uplifting : )

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Many thanks Isadora for your kind comments x

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Isadora Quagmire 14 July 2025

Your poem paints a lovely picture of memories and dreams, letting the reader imagine a peaceful world where every moment counts!

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Tom Allport 13 July 2025

A wonderful write of togetherness that's right...

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Thanks for your comments Tom x Much appreciated!

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Timber Koleden 12 July 2025

This poem is so grand and so sad! It makes me miss those who have gone before me. Thank you for sharing!

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Thank you Timber for your kind comments x

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 July 2025

Loving life in our own way always gives happiness. A beautiful poem with lovely images.

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Many thanks Rose Marie x

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