A dream terrified,
have lost my sleep at night,
don't know the reason why,
it has captured my sight.
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Your terrified dream may terrify your mood, But it makes your verse very well composed. ...Brishti Mazumdar
The abrupt tone of it really brings the impacts out, with a steady flowing rhythm. A dream that would make one sit in thought, isn't it? I hope never to have that dream.
really terrifying dream.......my mind guesses its reality for some though my heart wants to disbelieve this fact...... terror expressed well... good one
A terrifying dream well narrated there...flowing poem, Priyanka...i liked...10
You are penning so well about all disturbing thoughts. If it fiction it is OK. But if fact, the situation requires to be given a serious thought.
A terrifying dream and truth that wrenched your being and others who also have the same history..............10++++++++