A Dream Other Than Dreams Comments

The last section was brilliant Doc.

all trees full of monkeys, and i was feeling alone, on the bank of the river...... feeling all alone, , , delicate and heart feeling situation... very good write sir....... read mine all dreams not come true....you go all alone...butterflies around and anywhere

an interesting dream beautiful way of writing..well done

'and moon above his head, all trees full of monkeys, and i was feeling alone, on the bank of the river.' Marvelous write-nice ending.10+