A Dream Or True Reality...? Comments

Wow! This is really good! !

Great imagination in this composition. But it is scary to even think what would happen if this were to be true - that is - man tending to become an animal and animals getting transformed into human beings. Already in this world, there are examples to show that man is slowly losing his reasoning ability (as seen from barabaric acts of terrorism) - something that differentiates him from the animals.

10+ Again I would say your poem is wonderfully jolting the human consciousness! Very good write........critical smiles of amazing success....and were forwarding hand to hand towards...... the empty cities to occupy. DEAR FRIEND THIS MAY BECOME REALITY unless we come out of dream! Thanks for inviting.

Your poem shows us that man on the earth can also become beast in the fate of humanity. We either blame the world however we are also to blame. At the sight of devastation we become corrupted beasts with no control until we see the damage we've caused...

Excellent, , , , , , , but tell you it was your dream........... your imagination was well express, it happens in life sometime that your dream feel like its reality why you wake from your sleep than you know its not reality but just a dream nicely you wrote this poem........10++

Very creative and the imagery is amazing your poem is inspiring

Excellent imagery. Thanks for posting.

i so luved the way you penned it dwn...reallli gud

Very vivid! I like it.

strong voice i feel the rythm

it's very odd but i truly like it well done.

you translated it right? so good work but i think it's not a dream it's a nightmare +10

i think this is not a dream and not the realty too...some men acts like animals but thay are not no one could say that they are animals cuz we all human beings and brothers too...Nice poem.

And I know....I will postpone my dinner...I am far too occupied, very well penned..

Dream or real........we get confused when we find drifted values of man, and uplifting values of our loving pet animals......you may read mine..... A dream other than dreams.....you will enjoy that is similar to your ideas

A wonderfully fiction write, full creativety and instropection.

a wonderful instropection write..and well presented in poetic way.....10

afzal! it is fascinating & a one of it's kind 10+++++++++

wow! talk about thought provoking! great poem!

Again a lovely expression of disappointment in human civilization- a comparison of life in the jungles and jungle like cities!