I dreamt of you last night
i held you in my arms so tight
not once did your face fade
not until love we made
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I like the style on this one, again I am impressed with your work!
I like your use of rhyme here, It works with your other words, instead of just a random word at the end that rhymes. Interesting topic.
very beautiful. very heartfelt pain after losing the one you love. brave is the one left here after the one they love is gone.
A beautiful love poem and it is interested as much.