Tuesday, May 5, 2009

A Dream Of You Comments

Rating: 3.4

I dreamt of you last night
i held you in my arms so tight
not once did your face fade
not until love we made
...
Read full text

jason mcgookin
COMMENTS

A beautiful love poem and it is interested as much.

0 0 Reply
Shadow Girl 17 November 2011

beautiful, melancholy but sweet..liked it a lot. -SG

0 0 Reply
Sharon Herzog 19 February 2011

I like the style on this one, again I am impressed with your work!

0 0 Reply
Sharon-Ann Dawson 11 June 2009

I like your use of rhyme here, It works with your other words, instead of just a random word at the end that rhymes. Interesting topic.

0 0 Reply
Jacob Courtney 05 May 2009

very beautiful. very heartfelt pain after losing the one you love. brave is the one left here after the one they love is gone.

0 0 Reply
jason mcgookin

jason mcgookin

scotland
Close
Error Success