A Dream Of The Judgement Day Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

A Dream Of The Judgement Day

Rating: 4.8


No moon, no stars, no planets,
There was not even universe where they existed,
There was a vast land all around,
And a deluge of people probably billions in number,
Naked men and women bowing down their heads,
Waiting for their turns to meet their fate,
The sun was pouring fire on their heads,
They were being enquired of their deeds,
As per their deeds, they were being sent to Heaven or Hell,
God sat on a huge and cumbersome chair,
He was red with anger and ordering the angels,
They were running to and fro to carry out His orders,
He was resorted to punish the sinners mercilessly,
They were being thrown into inferno,
But suddenly He shouted and said,
'Mercy is greater than punishment and I'm the most merciful.'
He forgave them all and sent them to Heaven.
And I woke up as I felt
The rays of the sun on my face.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spiritual Seeker 25 June 2011

Very powerful message...but only the Most Merciful knows better...i totally aggree with you...His mercy supercedes all...for this i rate 10

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Rekha Mandagere 23 June 2011

The element of curiosity is fantastic. Great imagination and expression. You have beautifully shown that 'Transformation can be achieved through mercy and forgiveness'. and developing strong edifice to live happy and contented life through your great work. Thanks for sharing it. Marks 10+

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Maria Rose Dominic 23 June 2011

that was perfect! Amen to what u said God would do.

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Biff Mcguire 23 June 2011

Very descriptive of the last days, love the change from nightmare to dream in the end! ! ! 10!

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Hribhu Dey 22 June 2011

A perfect image of the Judgement Day day through a dream vision...loved the whole poem Dear. A 10

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without a name Face 14 July 2011

i'm not religious, but i think that this poem is alright.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 July 2011

'Mercy is greater than punishment and I'm the most merciful'.... i like this line... although of course, holiness, purity, love, and hunger for truth remains to be above all, God's mercies are always there... thanks for sharing...

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Ken E Hall 30 June 2011

A dream of heaven all waiting in Gods waiting room Gods mercy excelles here in this poem and the ending will make us all sleep well tonight with your great message++++++10...regards

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Sidra Naz 27 June 2011

A very well written poem... may Allah forgive us all and show us the path of righteousness...

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Indira Renganathan 26 June 2011

You are lucky to see God in your dream...Truth is that the creator alone is responsible for creating good and evil...once we surrender unto Him He frees us from evil and salvage us....interesting poem...10

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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