Tuesday, November 1, 2016

A Dream Of Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a desert of sand,
A dream of rain,
What is destiny but lines,
Etched on my hand
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Ayman Parray
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 November 2016

I agree, dreaming of snakes is alarming! But dreaming of death? Ayman, please change your mind! Even in life you can have peace. Ayman, you have a long, beautiful life before you! May God bless you always! A thought provoking, yet a wonderful poem!

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Kelly Kurt 02 November 2016

This may well be my favorite of all your poems so far, Ayman. Very well conceived, constructed and worded. I wish you peace my friend

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