Friday, December 8, 2006

A Dream.Mmm Lover Comments

Rating: 4.7

Defenseless I lay, cuddled up snugly in bed;
I'd done nothing to invite his appearance in my head
Except to drink in the danger of manic eyes
Earlier in the flickering light of his odd-guy guise.
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Esther Leclerc
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Scarlett Treat 10 March 2007

Occasionally we stumble across things that make us have to change our drawers, and this one did it for me! Here I was searching for some sweet, toothsome delight full of a sensual dream..........and I got DON KNOTTS? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! You crack me up!

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Someone Else 23 February 2007

The Impossible Dream My Dulcinea could only be If I were Daddy to Lil Opie Perhaps my love could only be The Svelte and lovely dear Aunt Bea

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Barry Van Allen 11 February 2007

Esther, I was reading that wacky Danny Reynolds, and your name kept coming up with nice entertaining comments! I suppose that I never even considered just how warped that you really could be! - - - not even Andy? Well, at least you are not a Floyd groupie! (Forget that I just said that) !

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Robert E Hann 28 January 2007

Esther, I had to read it twice because it was even better when you knew the punchline in advance.4HA's, Robert

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Scarlotte Ibis 09 January 2007

I definately laughed out loud! Don Knotts in bed...a surprise! Fun read!

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Diane Violet 21 December 2006

Ok, I'm whistling the the theme song now with a huge smile on my face..wonderful Esther. All the best, Diane

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Robert Howard 20 December 2006

Hmmm. Don Knotts - stud muffin. This may take some processing. Whatever lights you boat or floats your lamp. Thanks for a very entertaining read!

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Anna Russell 16 December 2006

Oh Esther, you make me smile :) Hugs Anna xxx

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Go E! ! ! ! Laughing.... a well-written, entertaining, dreamy, funny, free-spirited piece. A grand read to lift the mood! t x

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M S 12 December 2006

oh lord... LMAO, Esther! truly, your twist endings NEVER dissappoint. keep them coming, lady!

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 10 December 2006

Now that you mention it, there is something about his lips... a very entertaining poem. -Eila

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Duncan Wyllie 10 December 2006

Your imagination and imagery paint alot of interesting colours Love duncan X

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R H 10 December 2006

Though I can't picture this guy - you've made that easy - a wild and wacky write Est, full of energy and fun - definitely has your stamp on it. Very well composed, deserves to be read aloud. Justine :)

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Alison Cassidy 10 December 2006

Crazy woman - you get some weird ideas and rhyme some amazing poetry out of them. This one is 10+ for imagination and comedic timing. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Sandra Fowler 09 December 2006

Ten for your fantastic imagination. This one is really original, Esther. Warm regards, Sandra

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Brian Dorn 08 December 2006

Esther, only you could 'dream' this up! I love Don Knotts, 'The Reluctant Astronaut' and 'The Ghost of Mr. Chicken'... two of my all time favorites! In fact, I have a poster of Barney Fife on my closet door! ! Great write, VERY original and truely hysterical. Brian

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 December 2006

Dear Thelma Lou>>>tALK TO ME, BABY...jUANITA MEANS NOTHING TO ME! Favorite show of all time...Remember when he thought Andy was after Thema lou, and so Barney went after Elly? Great Write ESTHER! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Patricia Gale 08 December 2006

A side I never thought about, but well done Esther!

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