Friday, May 30, 2014

A Dream Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

O, bright star sits at the table of the night.
The dim face of the dark hides the velvet of your light.
Your radiance glitters like gold in everyone sight.
Forever in my heart you are my delight.
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Ivy Pabillo
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Naila Rais 10 June 2018

A lovely poem.... Full of warm love... Keep it up.. Thanks for sharing... You may like to read my poems and express your views too... Naila

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ivy Pabillo 10 June 2018

thanks for the comment..

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Dev Anand 22 August 2017

Your radiance glitters like gold in everyone sight. Forever in my heart you are my delight. your sounds of silence. such beautiful expressions dear poetess. thank you very much for this delightful poem.. dev

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Ivy. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Hassan Hayati 14 August 2017

lots of emotion and rhythm is very melodious

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2017

Forever in my heart you are my delight. the sound of your silence smiles and joys the star my treasure........ very well written..... love is a mystery. it should ever remain a mystery. God is mystery. love is also a mystery.. very nice. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2016

A beautiful poem, Ivy. Well done. Thanks for sharing

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ivy Pabillo 01 August 2016

thank you...

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Emits thought from the heart from beginning to end.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 September 2015

Your radiance glitters like gold in everyone sight. Forever in my heart you are my delight. Bright star sits at the table. brilliant, full of images. thank you very much

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Indranil Bhaduri 25 June 2015

Fantastic write.. Loved it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 May 2015

'Bright star sits at the table of the night' is really unique.Like the flow and concept.Keep inking.

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Sekharan Pookkat 24 May 2015

velvet of your love light glitters like golden lantern- enough images to revel your treasure of love

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spreads the bright rays of deep romance

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ivy Pabillo 23 May 2015

Wish to have one....

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Every lines and words have full of brilliance

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Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2014

Fantastic imagery, Ivy! It gives me a feeling of joy when reading it! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Vijay Sai R 02 June 2014

plenty of love pouring all through the poem

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Colleen Courtney 30 May 2014

A beautifully written poem! Enjoyed the read!

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