Thursday, April 28, 2016

A Dream Lost In Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

A lone forlorn land,
With quietude and stillness
A violin shall stand
And stir the veil gossamers,
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Emilia Rivera rio
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 February 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Emilia. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Christopher Tye 05 July 2016

Nice poem, dream can only come true when we pursue them. Langston Hughes wrote a lot of great works and also inspires me a lot.

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Annette Aitken 03 July 2016

An old dream By a daffodil vale And tinkles like rhyme Next, to edelweiss dale you could pick any stanz to enjoy, but this one seems to stand out the most to me. Your words create a beauitful picture as you read along. Nicely penned. Annette

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 July 2016

No more waves of dance No more sleeps on bower A shady dew on a mayflower A lapsing fall by a lavender... is really beautiful. Nice poem with beautiful wording and flow.Loved it.

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