A Dream Lies Dead Comments

Feels like my miscarriage 😭

Im scared to offer an opinion about the poem.

Walk not in woe....sound advice!

Has the dream died?

just stunning

when somebody is completely had enough from disappoint of people and failure in some point of life, he just feels like this is it, but as long as we breath we mustn't give up.

dream in imperfect head becomes dead before the perfect world!

Dream is not dead

Nicely written sonnet. I endorse Mr Cronick's excellent comment

A brilliant poem about a thing of beauty that helps bring balance to the world. Then the tragic death of this dream reflects the imperfectness as well as reducing the beauty that exists in this world.

A lovely petrarchan sonnet... It started me getting teary eyed...

A powerful poem! Thanks for sharing!

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I love this

I bow before your poetic craft.

The personification of dream! ! I liked it very much. Congratulations poet.

I really liked it it seems to me the extention of Dream by L. Huges.

I assume that this is being read by a robot. Is that right?

my choice so nice so inspirational poem..

Lovely, excellent choice of words and effective use of punctuation.