A Dream Journey To Paradise! ! Comments

You find paradise when you learn peace and happiness within your soul and learn that life is a school room and we go through tests, which are teaching us to be wiser and stronger for next time. And you learn that you cannot control others or the outside world, you can control only yourself, that don't fall apart for every happening, but know that God is there and helps you through anything. That is living in paradise. Anyway it would be a boring thing to wonder around in a garden and do nothing. That way we would never evolve, never learn life lessons.

..your dream..beautifully put into words...but it was sad that you woke up from that dream... ..i wish that dream was for real...

A luvli dream too [Yorkshire people say luvli] written with true life words are we so lucky to have such nature, very nice to read...regards

It seems an honest flow of thoughts, the choice of words made me feel bit off track, any ways not much harm by that...the poem deserves an applause..write on

Yes, the paradise where eternity found the place where peace flows. after Renujee, i do not find any appropriate, eternity is the end point. top marks

a nice picture of paradise...even if in a dream..good write

Beautiful portrait.....good poem,10**** Rose)))))

Beautiful poem Sajna, I believe your life is Blessed and full of Love.

Wow! ! this is a great piece Sajna.......beautiful poem..

Still day dreaming! .good write.keep it up.

It always ends like that.. When you lost on your own utopia, how beautiful it is, it's not real. .. I can picture it.Nice!

Wow! ! you seriously took us to paradise... Nice write :)

A really good poem, like it a lot. A great write.

Wow, it's a fantastic poem, , well written with nice imageries...I like this poem! ! top marks! !