The pretty world Around us and in us Is like a flashy dream, When we grasp it, It flies away like a passing cloud. It's the dream that lives in us And we don't live in it because It does not stay. It's a difficult dream
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Brilliant imagination and creativety. I enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing
Wonderful poetic paragraph..just like a rainbow bubble bursting at the happiest moment...thank you for sharing..
It's more like a speech than like a poem. The content is great and I sense a poet in you, just put the word like how a true poet does and how a true poem should be. I hope you read my other poems and rate mine too. Regards, Vaibhav Simha.
Sort of philosophical drop. The life is just a bubble that bursts at any time without giving any indication. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. Congrats.
a wonderful and interesting poem about life's dream of which all living creatures participate in every day of their lives? ....................well written MS
Congratulations for writing such a nice piece, I read it times. I think it is a right conception of life and dreams. Thanks Mohammad.
Like a dream that is short lived, that seemed so real when sleeping, vanishes after we wake up, our life, the world around us and within us too changes. and the things that were so real for our life in the past stay with us like a dream in our consciousness.A nice philosophical write, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being the Poet of the Day.
Such a heartwarming poem, Mohammad...congrats for being chosen once again....a highest 10++++++
Wow! This is wonderful! Congratulations! Your beautiful dream poem has come on screen as the poem of the day. It's a tricky dream that you live it for long time and we hop for long to read. Moment of dream may go back so quickly but its tender touch remains in mind. An excellent poem this is...10
Great read, feels like a pair of hands holding up the soul: The whole life is like a pretty Dream that is a moment that Goes away quickly though we feel it Like a long trip in our life. Wonderful choice as the poem of the day, Congratulations!
mohammad, my poem At the Threshold has similar ideas. -glen kappy
Lovely philosophical presentation of the journey of our life which looks pretty long but which could be as transitory as a dream which does not last long. Thanks for sharing. I quote: It's a moment that goes quickly In a huge trip in one's life. The whole life is like a pretty Dream that is a moment that Goes away quickly though we feel it Like a long trip in our life.
Dream and waking have been contrasted and studied in ancient scriptures. Your poem echoes those ancient forays. Good read. Congrats for poem of the day. Something baffles - why are certain words capitalized and why is the poem written in a continuous stretch without line-breaks? Any particular reason?
A wonderfully beautiful read.Congratulations on being apoem of member of the day.Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Without dreams, nothing would ever get invented. Fascinating poem. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!
Moving along in this world. Thanks for sharing this pome with us. Having your poem as, poem of the day.
Excellent poem Mohammed