Sunday, June 9, 2013

A Dream In A Pretty World Comments

Rating: 4.5

The pretty world Around us and in us Is like a flashy dream, When we grasp it, It flies away like a passing cloud. It's the dream that lives in us And we don't live in it because It does not stay. It's a difficult dream
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MOHAMMAD SKATI
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Michael Cochrane 23 December 2022

Excellent poem Mohammed

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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

Brilliant imagination and creativety. I enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing

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Rini Shibu 13 October 2017

Beautiful poem.. Congratulations for poem of the day

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Wonderful poetic paragraph..just like a rainbow bubble bursting at the happiest moment...thank you for sharing..

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Vaibhav Simha 12 October 2017

It's more like a speech than like a poem. The content is great and I sense a poet in you, just put the word like how a true poet does and how a true poem should be. I hope you read my other poems and rate mine too. Regards, Vaibhav Simha.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 October 2017

Sort of philosophical drop. The life is just a bubble that bursts at any time without giving any indication. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. Congrats.

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Tom Allport 12 October 2017

a wonderful and interesting poem about life's dream of which all living creatures participate in every day of their lives? ....................well written MS

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Hassan Hayati 12 October 2017

Congratulations for writing such a nice piece, I read it times. I think it is a right conception of life and dreams. Thanks Mohammad.

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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2017

Like a dream that is short lived, that seemed so real when sleeping, vanishes after we wake up, our life, the world around us and within us too changes. and the things that were so real for our life in the past stay with us like a dream in our consciousness.A nice philosophical write, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being the Poet of the Day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Such a heartwarming poem, Mohammad...congrats for being chosen once again....a highest 10++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Wow! This is wonderful! Congratulations! Your beautiful dream poem has come on screen as the poem of the day. It's a tricky dream that you live it for long time and we hop for long to read. Moment of dream may go back so quickly but its tender touch remains in mind. An excellent poem this is...10

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Elena Sandu 12 October 2016

Great read, feels like a pair of hands holding up the soul: The whole life is like a pretty Dream that is a moment that Goes away quickly though we feel it Like a long trip in our life. Wonderful choice as the poem of the day, Congratulations!

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Glen Kappy 12 October 2016

mohammad, my poem At the Threshold has similar ideas. -glen kappy

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2016

Lovely philosophical presentation of the journey of our life which looks pretty long but which could be as transitory as a dream which does not last long. Thanks for sharing. I quote: It's a moment that goes quickly In a huge trip in one's life. The whole life is like a pretty Dream that is a moment that Goes away quickly though we feel it Like a long trip in our life.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 12 October 2016

Dream and waking have been contrasted and studied in ancient scriptures. Your poem echoes those ancient forays. Good read. Congrats for poem of the day. Something baffles - why are certain words capitalized and why is the poem written in a continuous stretch without line-breaks? Any particular reason?

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 12 October 2016

A wonderfully beautiful read.Congratulations on being apoem of member of the day.Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Kim Barney 12 October 2016

Without dreams, nothing would ever get invented. Fascinating poem. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2016

Moving along in this world. Thanks for sharing this pome with us. Having your poem as, poem of the day.

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Mark Heathcote 06 October 2014

My dreams feel as real as life at times. Nice one.

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Leah Ayliffe 27 May 2014

This is a great read. Fabulous.

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