A Dream I Have To Write Comments

Naseer Ahmed Nasir! Beautiful poem.

Each morning I wake up with a hope to see a new beautiful message from you Sir! ! ! Thank you for making my day. Sincere Regards.

A dream, a moon, a song, a name...things worthy to be written - wonderful poem... I was thinking, how good that you have written it - now, probably months after it came to the world, I can read it! So, do keep writing...dream, moon, song, name...

nothing escapes your compassionate eyes. the first A dream I have to write on the wooden slate of a child playing truant from school made me smile, but as i read on i was touched by the images; such is the effect of your poetry, it lingers on long after one has logged off. Naseer. Regards Mamta

Simply beautiful sir....! ! !

different dreams, different forms of creation...loved it! ! !

A name I have to write On an unmarked Grave stone wonderful symbolistic confessional poem, lovely to read............ 10++++++++++

WOOOOOOOW! ! ! .......GREAT POEM......

The magic consistence of poetry is sometmes just in a few lines as here: frozen lips of the wind Passing through A bamboo forest... which makes you dream...

bamboo forests, how i love bamboo forests, so dream on and write on Nasser. I just wonder what your work will be like i the original Urdu togue. this is simple and profound. mark

This is a clever write with very deep theme. Dream more and write more, my friend. Brilliant piece! :)

I love your poem and it reminds me with a beautiful memories.

this is my dream too......... but, when i vanish i donot even want a tombstone........

I must click 10+ for this fine poem chowdhury sahab!

So much to do in so little time... then theres no time. A deeply thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing with us :)

a candle, i have to keep on the dark corners of mind met a true writer.......................

Lovely poem and full of meaning.

Message from Sue Wildman: From: Sue Wildman (Blue Mountains Australia; Female; 50) To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir Date Time: 6/10/2009 6: 04: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Thank you, Naseer.. I have just finished reading 'A dream I had to write' and I found it a very beautiful poem, powerful and moving. It flows, taking you with it, on a course you fear the tide will take you to. You are dumped on the shore. Hit with a sad reality. Thank you for sharing your poems with us. I am looking forward to reading more. Sue Wildman

I love this poem Very Good job! Please read mine!

hey i read some of your poems, there deep and creative good job. I must say you have opened my mind