A Dream Fallen Out Of Sleep Comments

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magnificent poetry...i am always in awe of your poems...wish to write like this someday! ! !

Somewhere two flowers bloom excellent descriptive metaphorical poem 10++++++++++

very sweet ang cute, keep it up! !

great thoughts.....penned greatly.......all together ammmmmmazing! 10+

Very beautiful we remain unaware of certain changes......during our sleep but our sub concious wants to know them...it is very beautiful thought

its really really beuatiful poem. They way it was presnted and the chosen words it was somthing amazing and much more.

wonderful thoughts and writing..i love the flow of this poem..wishing that i will give luck to this poem..feeling that..we will wait..10++++Outside the abode of our sleep Somewhere two flowers bloom Somewhere we see each other every day Somewhere the wounds are sutured Outside the abode of our sleep Somewhere a roof is lit up A door is afire Somewhere hidden Somewhere revealed Outside the abode of our sleep A dream burns.

your poems are magical...sir you are a fantastic poet. one who can weave beautiful pictures in the head and still paint them the same way on paper using subtle words...a round of applause to you. i bow to you sir!

This is amazing poetry in every way. Your images create pictures of unforgettable beauty. You are a true master of the pen Naseer. 10 Karin Anderson

absolutely amazing. great imagery. keep writing.

'Somewhere we see each other every day Somewhere the wounds are sutured' Amazing melodious poem,10 with love.

Outside the abode of our sleep Somewhere a roof is lit up 'A door is afire Somewhere hidden Somewhere revealed Outside the abode of our sleep A dream burns' great imagery..you have portrayed it very well Nazeer...great.....yet i m glad that war is finally over..cheers.just hope things will get better..thanks..10+++.

I know I read and commented before on this poem, but on rereading it, I find it even more powerful! Sometimes we find much more on a second look. The structure pulls me in, the images build to a crescendo. Naseer, truly a thing of beauty!

a dreamy poem make me feel that soft feeling when we acout to fall in sleep that moments between the awaeness and the un consiousness..images passed through our mind on the screen of our life....beautiful writting..10+++

wow that was awesome man! i really liked i alot =)

I think I have fallen in love with this one!

i can almost see those descriptions. it was a mindblowing little piece which i would read to my friends and see how they think! ***************100000000000000!

This poem, it's so vivid and I love the way, I can see everything so beautiful, you are a true poet.

Wow! you paint such vivid pictures with your words! it's absolutely beautiful, so indescribable. You are very talented! ! !