I want to be where
i can find peace there
A small cabin of clay made
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The rhyming of the poem is a success.you've captured the essence of a beautiful enviroment.one can feel and yearn for all this beauty.
well said..a dream destination is always the best destination...
i hear in my deep heart's core a river water lapping with sounds by the shore! ......... flute by surge reels through whorl yet the shore resounds from core, quite passionate dream, heart when splashes by tune of ecstasy, well penned, thanks for sharing
yes; a dream destination where we will find peace, solitude! ! ! ! everyone wants this! !