Tuesday, July 12, 2011

A Dream Concert Comments

Rating: 5.0

make the most of life you can,
as it can go so fast,
a sprinkle of sand,
that is all the time we have,
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Sharron Stephenson
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 April 2018

take a special moment and hold on tight, a bad memory is just a flicker of dust, floating around a mind of thoughts, a nightmare is a dream wrong, beautiful poem..... a song sung from the high - the spirits...... such wonderful images....... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Karen Sinclair 16 October 2012

Beautifully laid out and uplifting, with the positivity required to pass through our moment in the hourglass....tyvm karen

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Ken E Hall 09 October 2011

So so right every day is now...the time to live the full you have me dancing now great motivating poem...regards

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Robert Wilson 04 September 2011

a good poem, well written

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Santosh Sharma 25 July 2011

A SONG SUNG FROM THE TOP OF HILL WILL ECHO ALL AROUND, LIFE IS TRULY A BLISS BY HIS GRACE WE ONLY OUR SWEET SONGS SPEAK LOUDER THAT ANY THING ELSE GRETE WRITE - 10

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Kevin Eaglesfield 20 July 2011

You're right, we don't get long, a speck of sand in the scheme of things. Nicely put.10

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Unwritten Soul 12 July 2011

Nice composition in sheet of musical thought.... :) A dream of a harmonious concert is by synchronizing mind and soul...i hope you could play it together like in this write, then in will be the nice life theme ever :) _Unwritten Soul

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