Thursday, July 30, 2009

A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the curtains of your brow;
where millions of dreams grow.
I wonder if some are of mine too?
Where love in some and ecstasy endow?
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Dave Tanwar
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A beautiful poem Dave, reflecting poetically with longing. I love the last two stanzas that lead up to 'in the world under your curtains of your brow where millions of dreams grow'. 10 Karin Anderson

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Indira Renganathan 03 August 2009

The depth of confidence sounding musical in the depth of dreaming....very nice...thanks

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Kerry O'Connor 30 July 2009

I enjoyed this poem. It conveys a sense of hope in uncertainty. Interesting rhyme scheme too. Much appreciated.

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Dave Tanwar

Dave Tanwar

Jodhpur, India
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