i saw a dream
with flowers in the garden
with the breeze in a sudden
with the birds singing
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Dream and dreams. dream is over. I am thankful to my friends and sisters. good poem. I invite you Raj, to read my poems and comment. Rajbhai, mu tumaku nimantrana kruchhi mora kabitagidika padhi kicchhi kahiba. kemiti achha?
it started off beautifully then ended sadly yet i still feel as if the dream is not that far....
started with a beautiful dreams then endedsadly but don't lose your dreams you will always find who desrve you..beautriful poem with beautiful images
a beutiful dream indeed...what is most amazing is the way your make the reader walk with your dream..simply amazing...
that was so cool i think that was the best one you have i love you babe lots of love aqila xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
A nice way of capturing readers attention by describing both aspects of a dream, the one that is inside and the one that comes afterwards when one wakes up..........Description of solitude is very elegant after what you have witnessed in your dream............10/10 Best Wishes Sameer
u r poem is vry well written..........n dnt wory 1 day ur dreams definately turn into reality............i know that...........
Rajnish... don't worry your dreams will come true as long as their are regularly renewed. nice heartfelt poem
I like this poem. Fine job. Bien!