Sunday, March 22, 2009

A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

i saw a dream
with flowers in the garden
with the breeze in a sudden
with the birds singing
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rajnish jena
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Shania K. Younce 11 August 2014

I like this poem. Fine job. Bien!

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Gajanan Mishra 30 January 2013

Dream and dreams. dream is over. I am thankful to my friends and sisters. good poem. I invite you Raj, to read my poems and comment. Rajbhai, mu tumaku nimantrana kruchhi mora kabitagidika padhi kicchhi kahiba. kemiti achha?

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Lerato M 31 January 2010

it started off beautifully then ended sadly yet i still feel as if the dream is not that far....

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started with a beautiful dreams then endedsadly but don't lose your dreams you will always find who desrve you..beautriful poem with beautiful images

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Shreya Chatterjee 13 September 2009

a beutiful dream indeed...what is most amazing is the way your make the reader walk with your dream..simply amazing...

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Kai c. 06 September 2009

awwwww......... maybe the dream might come true

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

nice 2 read and well written

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Aqila Hussain 04 April 2009

that was so cool i think that was the best one you have i love you babe lots of love aqila xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Sameer Ahmed 03 April 2009

A nice way of capturing readers attention by describing both aspects of a dream, the one that is inside and the one that comes afterwards when one wakes up..........Description of solitude is very elegant after what you have witnessed in your dream............10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Ishita Mehta 01 April 2009

u r poem is vry well written..........n dnt wory 1 day ur dreams definately turn into reality............i know that...........

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Chitra - 23 March 2009

Rajnish... don't worry your dreams will come true as long as their are regularly renewed. nice heartfelt poem

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