A Dream Comments

Great piece...short and quick to read but forever will live....lovely..

Very nice poem, in fact pure love in this world is not found, if the lover find real love in the world, it will be a matter of fortune, and the rest of life they live in dream though it is the conscious world of man.Take care. Shanazar

simple and elegant it does happen that way sometimes and with luck it lasts

Now this is just plain great........way beyond and better than Two Smiles.....love it...and btw...........slow as heck getting in here today, AGAIN, thought it was fixed.. m.m. :)

Beautiful, simple, present... thank you for sharing.

Wow! a very romantic poem! i can feel it..i hope there's a part II on this. lovely!