Thursday, April 19, 2007

A Dream? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kisses
as soft
as a butterfly
landing
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vince gullaci
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Michael Fischer 19 April 2007

Beautiful poem! I especially liked how you compared a kiss to a butterfly landing on your lips. Very nice touch! What also makes this poem great for me is that its a beautiful day here in Buffalo and the poem is an extention of that! Top marks! -Michael

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