A Dream Comments

very interesting and thought provoking.well presented.

the truth of life and the illusion of life handled at so many levels of awareness...well written

Your poem is very philosophical. You are very clever and have a lot of wisdom. I gave your poem a perfect 10.

A dream sounds like a very complex state. Very interesting poem though. I like complexity. --Melvina--

wow so much dream yes, because malaysia is a bolehland. where r you from.