Friday, December 30, 2016

A Dream.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the edge of the moon
I wonder what life will hold
If I slip from there in this world
What dreams will accompany me to land
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 August 2020

A dream! ! ! ! Wondering along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 December 2016

Dream is beautiful and so is this lovely poem.................................

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 December 2016

Dream is wonderful ever and mysteries lie behind a dream ever. We rise and fall in dream and perceive many real and animated happenings. On the edge of moon we wonder and wander and we wonder for sun's appearance. Nature is very interesting to reflect dream of reality. A magical flow is marked well in this dream poem and this deserves rating of 10 definitely.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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