Thursday, March 3, 2016

A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have got something for you
something to tell you
Something to grieve for
Something to be happy for
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Aakash Nengroo
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2017

Euphemestically inscribed. Thrilling expression. Let me quote some lines.. .. You enter our room... With a cup of tea..full of love Smiled at me... Gave me a good morning kiss Making me feel on the cloud nine I get to see our little princess Dressed up..ready to leave for school But... This is a beautiful poem on love and life. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 June 2017

So frightening to have a dream like that.... Rated 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST.. Thanks👍

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Shaista Amin 22 April 2017

itz awesome

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Aakash Nengroo 23 April 2017

thanks my dear

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Zakir Bhat 13 March 2017

U are really born disastrous ..... So nice .....

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Aakash Nengroo 23 April 2017

bs aise hi likhi thi yaar

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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2017

You've got the talent for story writing. A train of thought nicely captured in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Aakash.

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Roxanne Dubarry 21 April 2016

I have a dream! I love your heart warming poetry. Thank you for sharing it with me!

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Aakash Nengroo 23 April 2016

Thanks dear....its just the fire inside which makes these words warm....

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 March 2016

You enter our room... With a cup of tea..full of love Smiled at me... Gave me a good morning kiss Making me feel on the cloud nine then suddenly the dream turns out to be a satanic....... as i read i said to myself. it cannot be true. we shall never be slaves of unhappiness. break the fetters and be happy. tony

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Aakash Nengroo 05 March 2016

I will sir.....but sadness z also much needed in life

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Gajanan Mishra 04 March 2016

enjoy life, my dear, it is full of love..

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