Thursday, July 18, 2013

A Dream Comments

Rating: 4.6

I still hold a dream of floating paper boats,
When it rains a child in my heart wakes
And wish to make a boat of paper and to dote
On the memories of the past,
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Yasmin Khan
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Gnossienne 12 April 2014

Achingly beautiful x

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Jodie Hardy 27 August 2013

I love the way you paint a wonderful picture with so few words. xxx

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Ken E Hall 15 August 2013

Sweet dreams of childhood in memories woke by the rain so true 'Golden were the days' very nice words painted with the poets pen...regards

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Mohabeer Beeharry 09 August 2013

How sweet. Those are the days. We grow old. But we try hard to keep them with us till the last. Mohabeer Beeharry

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David Wood 19 July 2013

We all would love to visit enjoyable moments our past. Lovely poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 July 2013

Beautiful visit into the past. Enjoyable indeed.

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Bright Morn 18 July 2013

A very nice poem, remind me my childhood, picturesque, these lines are fabulous Ours were the sun and sky Flowers wild, crickets and butterfly. Very good write

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Shahzia Batool 18 July 2013

Nostalgic, picturesque and pleasant to read Jasmeen!

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Gajanan Mishra 18 July 2013

running through bushes we sing really, good write.

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Yasmin Khan

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