Thursday, March 14, 2013

A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Most ovious things occur among us
Almost everyday, every second
We certainly go on doing our works-everytime
None of our business whether soneone is dying
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Vizard Dhawan
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Fine poem...a portrayal of reality.

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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013

excellent write. life is this way sometimes

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Rajesh Thankappan 17 June 2013

Your poem portrays a poignant image of the harsh realities of life. Excellent writing. Keep it up.

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Jenie Franksay 14 March 2013

NICE ONE...........

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