A Dream Comments

You totally reached the passion in your poem, expressing it superbly. Great feeling coming from it's depths. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

What a write! Simply superb_Soul

Lovely poem, very descriptive.

Make me immortal in love and joy.....i love that phrase.....good work

I like your poem and I read it twice and try to understand your feeling.

I have a friend that calls me Mr. Romantic. You have got it all over me. I could never reach that standard. Ray.

A beautiful poem indeed. Great words and excellent flow. I like it

Touching.. Could U be the Helen of my Troy! ! ! Really a hunting one.... Enchanting language bestowed with the charisma of engulfing hearts... The way U started and then swiftly moved towards your keynote is endearing.. Love it

REminds me of John Donne. A hint of Metaphysical poetry. Very touching. I liked the allusion on Helen. Wonderful Gulsher.10+++

Really nice romantic poem. It's wonderful

very nice poem so beautifully written by you. i liked it very much. and thank you for he share. :)