Thursday, March 22, 2012

A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart swells
And wells
With joy
When I picture
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chandra thiagarajan
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Patricia Grantham 12 June 2013

A beautiful poem about a dream. You so brilliantly described scenery where there is dancing, singing and frolicking around the glorious Heavens finally to lose their grip and fall down to the troubled earth. An inspiring write and a joy to read.

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Heather Wilkins 02 June 2013

each stanza is a poem within itself. beautiful imagery. well written. enjoyed the read

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Farah Ilyas 25 May 2013

Nice poem adored with beautiful imagery, fantastic job.

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Savita Tyagi 04 April 2013

A lovely read with beautiful imagery. Dreams are wonderful when you are hand in hand with a loved one. Ofcourse we always have to come back to this old cold world but that little joy stays with us.

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Asif Andalib 24 November 2012

Beasutiful write. May your life remain a sweet dream like this one

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Valsa George 04 November 2012

A wonderful dream made musical with the use of alliterative words! ! A very enjoyable read! !

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Karen Sinclair 28 September 2012

A beautifully worded piece of poetry....initially but as often happens i dreams it appears you are then taken on the helter skelter to slide into this old world.... tyvm karen

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