A Dream Comments

A world of peace and gentleness comes before your eyes in dream and turns into paradise of reality. Each of us should see such dream to motivate lives in reality of peaceful and lovable world. All creatures dance and play here. All flowers bloom beautifully. Nature is graceful. An excellent dream poem is nicely penned...10

I love the flow of the beautiful narrative poem. A subtly penned and nicely encapsulated train of thoughts depicting the unveiling of Paradise on the occasion of Coming Of The Lord. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

Beautiful dream poem shared on. Nice way of seeing better world. Excellent job done and shared on. Excellent work.

It is impossible to fully comprehend the extent of the elegance of your pen... so many facets...such beauty, such grace and poise... I bow to you dear poet... in awe.

This is really beautiful... thats the kind of poems that you are searching for reading....liked it

Such a beautiful dream, heavenly.

You have pulled me into your dream with you. Very beautiful with perfect flow.

A beautiful world of dreams. your last stanza a perfect finish

Dear Valerie, What a beautiful poem! Good words and very heavenly. I am waiting for another dream(smile) Much appreciated.

beautiful, my poetry is not up to your standard

A magnificent Dream which made me really emotional. The lines For all humanity became As just one beating heart Together joined in harmony Thus no more to set apart are such golden words which sing a symphony in my ears and are ever echoing! A fantastic noble dream-I wish with all my heart it turns true!

Am amazing dream Valerie, you have so much feeling. This time of year too is meant to be the happiest yet really... it is probably the saddest. Thank You x

I love it! Well written..Kevin.

Very nicely weaved. wish you the best Udaya. See my poetry and comment

Just purely beautiful... im so glad i picked another one of yours to read as i needed cheering up......ty so much karen

Just Beautiful Valerie

Oh! what a fantastic dream! How I wish to be transported into such a land where humanity becomes one beating heart and where a heavenly melody resounds over the earth! ! !

I loved it, so bold and honest, so fun to experience.

That was a beautiful poem Val, a fantastic write, a pleasure to read.

Luvli dream sadly it is not the case in reality but without dreams we have nothing...regards