Friday, September 30, 2011

A Dream Comments

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If a dream is all I have to hold,
Then i'll grasp it with both hands,
Because I don't want to let this go.
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jess jayne
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Tammie Aimson 04 April 2012

keep hold on that dream it will come true hopfully but be prepared if it doesnt - my peoms have an ending that some people think are not right but its raellity. fantastic rhyms. xx Tamara xx

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Valerie Dohren 28 March 2012

A lovely poem - you may like to read mine also called A Dream.

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Stefanie Fontker 30 September 2011

Keep holding onto that dream of yours, until your hands bleed. Sometimes that's the only way it'll come true. Beautiful poetry.

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