A Dream Comments

Awesome! its really a poetic heart. i will also gift you the glowing stars.

Amazing lines hereby and superb poetic temperament

So heavenly Vipins! There is the celestial light haloing your love.Stupendous.

Some lucky girl is waiting for the star bangle chariot you paint with words...glowing poem indeed...regards

You roam in your chariot with glowing stars in your hand to give your love whose whereabouts you don't know. Don't worry friend. Lord Hanuman will trace her out and bring her to you. Skyhigh imagination!

wonderful imagination.jk

great imagery, with nice thoughts.

Good imagination. keep it up

Hey hSuch I nice poem u can right some really good poems

A wonderful imagination Vipins. Greetings to you. Dr.V.K.Kanniappan

she doesn't know that I Love her. this beauty of love.... nice lines and good composittion...10

Love makes us dream nobly. Love causes us to sacrifice. And in our dreams, as well as in reality, love is a mystery. You've made good use of imagery to help get your message across. Good job.

That's a beautiful poem.

Hope flies in this poem up above the sky high. Yikes! in the fantasy world has no limitations. I wonder the way poet has stretched his imagination with this poem where he flew the Utopian world and lived in the realm of thoughts. 'To find out my lover as I dont know where she is and she doesn't know that I Love her. But I'll gift her the glowing stars as diamonds on her crown.. ' A noble thanks for your imagination and red carpet welcome to the poet jot-down few more poems like this. Dear Vipins I will give my smile take it and smile. :) :) :) :)

beautiful....your dream will come true one day.

I LIKE THIS ONE! the last sentence is more than amazing, i like ur imagination :)

Nice poem, good read!

may god bless you to find her soon as posible

Nice...really nice! Beautiful imagination of the great cosmos to express unknown secret love.10

It's really beautiful